The continuation of Rick's story in the BHWA.
I planned to make it two parts, but it looks like his first (maybe last?) match in the Alliance will be three parts.
I promise to at least wrap up his fight against Van "The Truck" Carson" in the third chapter. (See the pun there?)
This one is a little slow too, so bear with me.
Part three is pure action and I'm working on it now.
Hope to have it done early this week.
I went with you guy's suggestions. Keeping Rick's story more of a soft core feel. Might experiment later with some other characters though if you want me to keep going.
Thanks for all your feedback on part 1.
It was encouraging and helpful.
I'd like to know how you like Van Carson and if you think I should let him kill Rick off or spare him for a later match, or maybe let him survive but unable to continue. (Don't worry, I can always create a new character if he can't go on.)
Might turn this into a contest too and let one commenter be included in the next story...or at least lend their name to a heel/jobber. |
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